一、大作文

1. 第一段

This is a bar/line/pie chart/graph which describes

  • the general trend of __________ .
  • the proportion of _________(提炼关键词).
  • …(图标标题)

+时间

  • from 2010 to 2020.
  • between 2010 and 2020.
  • during the last 20 years.

To be specific/Specifically, ______. By stark contrast, ______.(具体化描述一组对比的图表的变动,例如增长、下跌、……)↓

  • 柱状图
    • increase sharply / decrease substantially v. + adv.
    • experience(中性)/enjoy(好)/suffer from(坏) a dramatic decline adj. + n.
    • There is a sharp/gentle increase/rise/decrease/decline from ____ to ____ in ____.
  • 饼图
    • ______ account for 60%, the highest ratio among the (four) categories 突出占比
    • Simultaneously, ______% of the (students) intend to do sth. and ____to do sth. , respectively并列表述1(省略动词)
    • Approximately / Nearly / Only ____% and ____% of (students) intend to do sth. and do sth. , respectively并列表述2(分别)
    • nearly 20% ______ , another 20% ______ , the remaining 20% ______并列描述3(同量不同型)

2. 第二段

关键词(社会因素)

经济发展 econoic growth
社会影响 social impact/influence
人口膨胀 population explosion
教育体系 education system
科技创新 technological innovation

There are several/two fundamental factors contributing to this social phenomenon. The primary factor lies in ______(原因1). ______(阐述1). (回归主题句:Therefore/因此…增长/下降…)
Futhermore, ______(原因2). ______(阐述2).

  • social impact may give rise to this trend

3. 第三段

积极地

  1. With regard to this social tendency, I believe it is inspiring and positive. As this trend is still in its infancy, we believe it will no doubt go further and lead to the future prospect.

消极的

  1. To my knowledge, this social tendency is unfavorable(令人不快的). It is high time that(是...的时候了) we took actions to address the quandary(解决困境). I realize it needs to be slowed down since it has already posed negative impact to our society.

中性的

  1. Based on my personal experience, I can safety draw a conclusion that ______ is a double-edged sword. Whether it is a boon(恩惠) or a bane(毒药) will be discussed for a number of years to come. However, one should make sensible use, being a master rather than a slave of it.

4. 关键词

  1. 数量:
    number(可数), amount(不可数), statistics(统计数字)

  2. 比例:
    percentage, proportion, ratio, share

  3. 上升:
    go up, increase, climb, ascend, rise

    急速上升:increase sharply, surge, soar, rocket

  4. 下降:
    go down, decrease, decline, descend

    极速下落:plunge, slump

  5. 程度:

    • 剧烈:
      dramatically, significantly, sharply, substantially
    • 缓慢:
      slightly, steadily, gently, progressively, moderately
  6. 从…到…:
    from…to…, between…and…

  7. 某种/某些/某个
    certain, some

  8. 大约:
    about, around, some, roughly, nearly, approximately

  9. 分别
    respectively

  10. 对比:
    On the contrary, In/By (stark) contrast, Conversely

  11. 转折:
    However, Nevertheless, Nonetheless

  12. 因果:
    As a result/consequence, Consequently, Therefore

  13. 同时:
    Simultaneously, In the meantime, At the same time, Meanwhile

  14. 占比
    account for, constitute, make up

  15. 关注
    pay attention to, place emphasis on, lay stress on, attach importance to, emphasize
    focus on, concentrate on, care about, be concerned with, be interested in

  16. 保持不变
    remain + steady / static / unchanged / unvaried
    波动
    fluctuate

  17. 现象
    phenomenon, stituation
    趋势
    trend, tendency, inclination

  18. 在毕业之际 upon graduation

  19. 满意
    be satisfied with, be content with, show satisfaction to
    不满意
    be dissatisfied with, be discontent with, show dissatisfaction to

  20. 抚养:raise, bring up, breed
    赡养:support, maintain

二、小作文

Dear ______,
I am ______. I am writing this letter for the purpose of ____________.
To begin with _________. Furthermore, _____________.

结尾五选二
① Thank you very much for your time and consideration.(感谢)
② I apologize for any inconvenience caused.(道歉)
③ I am looking forward to your reply.(盼复)
④ I hope that you can enjoy your work and life.(祝愿)
⑤ Should you have any further questions, please let me know.(联系)

提建议句型

  • Will you please…(do)?
  • Would you mind…(doing)?
  • Is it possible for … to do sth.?